writers block...

[evulninja]

sucks! i usually can write poems and fuckin songs all day without stopping but this one has fuckin got me stumped.
im trying to write about this relationship i had that was totally bi-polar. one minute i loved the hell out of this chick and the next i just wanted to fuckin kill someone. ugh maybe someone here that can write well could help me out. im not sure if its gonna be a song or a poem yet but i do have some stuff on guitar in mind with the melodys and shit. anyway im totally serious about my writing so dont make a fuckin joke out of it. here it is..

violent waves approach the shore
anger builds them up some more
when it breaks youll be no more
dont need you today
so get out of my fucking way
youre gonna break
eventually im gonna break

every day you feed the storm
with eyes so gray and lips so warm
inviting me in with your charm
dont need you today
to get out of my fucking way
im gonna break
eventually youre gonna break

[Insanecowposse]

You wear me thin
but I can't begin
To think of life without you
You hold me close
with a short rope
But I just can't let you go

You are the calm
Before the Storm
and your fire burns my pride
You are far beyond the norm
But my heart , it bleeds inside

You are my pain
You are my soul
My desire calls your name
I am halved with you I'm whole

I've nothing left you took it all
My river of tears run deep
You need to be there when I call
or they'll be nothing left to grieve

Goodbye for now
Farewell adieu
You were my everything
You'll never know
What you meant and how
And how much that it stings

[dirtymonkey22]

Insanecowposse Wrote:You wear me thin
but I can't begin
To think of life without you
You hold me close
with a short rope
But I just can't let you go

You are the calm
Before the Storm
and your fire burns my pride
You are far beyond the norm
But my heart , it bleeds inside

You are my pain
You are my soul
My desire calls your name
I am halved with you I'm whole

I've nothing left you took it all
My river of tears run deep
You need to be there when I call
or they'll be nothing left to grieve

Goodbye for now
Farewell adieu
You were my everything
You'll never know
What you meant and how
And how much that it stings

FAG

[evulninja]

hahahahah thanks man not really what i was going for but its good

[juggalogigolo]

only cunts write poems

[sTr]

start writing some poems then

[Paullehh]

I make internet raps that catch you like traps
You cant touch my rhyme with your verbal slime
Watch me shine and take your time
I met your mumma and now that bitch mine
She aint so fine but to bang her you gotta wait in a line

[Slacker]

ELBOW MACARONI!

[Paullehh]

INORACAM WOBLE!

[Slacker]

blew my mind

[Star]

i remember when i sang the hook to hypnotize, but about pauly, way back when for his birthday. it was good times.

freeky freeky freeky
can't you see
sometimes your words just hypnotize me
and i just love your negro ways
guess that's why they're broke
and you're so paid

i think the other paul (xavier) did the raps for the rest, we owned.

[sTr]

! wish ! had a way to extract all the old b6 posts and bring them to the new board...

[Star]

word, that shit was awesome

[sTr]

word

[Enigma]

evulninja Wrote:im trying to write about this relationship i had that was totally bi-polar. one minute i loved the hell out of this chick and the next i just wanted to fuckin kill someone.

which one of you is the gemini?? that's usually how a relationship with a gemini works. i hate geminis.

[Insanecowposse]

I did the best I could but its hard to write how someone else feels for me writing comes from the heart. I was published twice when i was 17 and 18 and got and award from the senator at the time senator Ayala. Edgar allen poe was not a fag or a cunt he was cool as hell and many other poets were pretty sweet too. Most songs are in some sort of form of peotry and pretty much all rap and hip hop in in some sort of poetry so it is still relevant and cool. Fuck you Larry calling me a fag same guy who flashed me in his apartment.

[sTr]

You're the one that looked... bajaj

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[Slacker]

there once was a man from leeds
who swallowed a packet of seeds
tufts of grass
grew from his ass
and you couldn't see his balls for the weeds

[evulninja]

Enigma Wrote:

evulninja Wrote:im trying to write about this relationship i had that was totally bi-polar. one minute i loved the hell out of this chick and the next i just wanted to fuckin kill someone.

which one of you is the gemini?? that's usually how a relationship with a gemini works. i hate geminis.

im a capricorn

[dirtymonkey22]

Insanecowposse Wrote:I did the best I could but its hard to write how someone else feels for me writing comes from the heart. I was published twice when i was 17 and 18 and got and award from the senator at the time senator Ayala. Edgar allen poe was not a fag or a cunt he was cool as hell and many other poets were pretty sweet too. Most songs are in some sort of form of peotry and pretty much all rap and hip hop in in some sort of poetry so it is still relevant and cool. Fuck you Larry calling me a fag same guy who flashed me in his apartment.

yep FAG

[Insanecowposse]

I know you are but what am i?

[freEkjokA]

Star Wrote:i remember when i sang the hook to hypnotize, but about pauly, way back when for his birthday. it was good times.

freeky freeky freeky
can't you see
sometimes your words just hypnotize me
and i just love your negro ways
guess that's why they're broke
and you're so paid

i think the other paul (xavier) did the raps for the rest, we owned.

Pretty sure I have that MP3 somewhere. Pwnage.

[Star]

bajaj hi pauly <3

[freEkjokA]

:-*

[Star]

:-*

[Ms Felony]

[sTr]

! got writers cock...